Published April 5, 2007
Thou shalt not interview thysely...
Thou shalt show the entire maneuver...
Thou shalt not covet the Jet Sky...
Thou shalt compromise thy soundtrack...
Thou shalt not wheelie air...
Thou shalt not tow-at...
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shmegan bob's back:
Even if this were a serious attempt at literary allusion (for your sake, I'll assume it wasn't), it doesn't begin to meet the bare minimum for the namesake of "poetry."
Take heart,
Brad
I love all of it, but my favorite is the soundtrack part *laughs*
Great Stuff, your friend
SC
I....don't think this is a poem. And 'thysely' isn't a word.
You repeated "thou shalt not", ended each sentence with, '...' and it made no sense, and, yeah, like I said, isn't really a poem.
But uh, nice try?