Young Writers Society

shmegan bob's back:


Even if this were a serious attempt at literary allusion (for your sake, I'll assume it wasn't), it doesn't begin to meet the bare minimum for the namesake of "poetry."


Take heart,
Brad

shmegan bob's back wrote:
Thou shalt compromise thy soundtrack...

I....don't think this is a poem. And 'thysely' isn't a word.

You repeated "thou shalt not", ended each sentence with, '...' and it made no sense, and, yeah, like I said, isn't really a poem.

But uh, nice try?